By watching my classmate’s
video drafts it has given me a better idea of different aspects I can possibly
add into my video to make it complete and set for my final grade. Editing my
video will take a lot of time however it will only make it stronger and I know
what I want to add into my video. I am very glad that I worked on my video
draft and posted it ahead on time on to my blog in time to receive credit for
it and get everyone’s opinion about it. For my midterm video I unfortunately
did not get to receive any ideas that would’ve made my video better so I feel
even more confident this time around. In my opinion peer review in any
situation is effective I’m many ways from typos I didn’t know of and most of
all it helps me comprehend what’s confusing to the audience.
I
understand from my recommendations that I should be more organized with my
timeline and am working on that. I have a good sense of college level thinking
in my video so far and my skit is funny but I need to in cooperate more of the
problem and not confuse it with commuting. Commuting takes a big part in my
daily routine therefore I have to have that in my video but not emphasize it as
much/break it up somehow. I will plan on keeping my music the same in my video
but since I am adding onto my video I have the intention of adding more music.
I had a few typos that I need to change in my video draft. Also I want to apply at least two of more
skits including me that will add onto the problems I face with school and working. In
addition to working on my skits I want work on my planed interviews that can
count as my solution.